Tuesday, May 07, 2013

slice

What she said
when she caught me looking
as her sleeve slid up:




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and her sleeve slid back down
like a blade over skin.

3 comments:

Joanne Epp said...

Yes, very interesting. You let the reader know what's going on, but without spelling out what 'she' said. Or whether she said it out loud at all.

Unknown said...

is that Morse code or the cuts? sorry if that's a stupid question. I know it's difficult to format.

andie said...

Originally it was the cuts, and I put words between. And then suddenly I thought, I know, I'll put the same amount of dashes as the words have. ANd now I've kind of forgotten what the original words were although I might be able to figure them out :) But that's kind of the point I guess...the scars left behind.