Oh, how I loved reading this! Felt drunk with the things you throw my way..sunshine and wind and ..well, all of it. It is so full, I could smell feel hear it all. This might be my favourite, andie...
I like this... the way the sounds work, the way the images call up those aggressively bright and windy days. And the last line is...what? It evokes something I can't quite describe.
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Oh, how I loved reading this! Felt drunk with the things you throw my way..sunshine and wind and ..well, all of it. It is so full, I could smell feel hear it all. This might be my favourite, andie...
Nice sound/image work, Andie.
(Except how does one ring a bell from a throat steeple? Do I have a throat steeple and not know it?)
I like this... the way the sounds work, the way the images call up those aggressively bright and windy days. And the last line is...what? It evokes something I can't quite describe.
A - yes you bell your throat steeple all the time - and never know it. Some people get their clapper removed, don't know why.
(re-reading it makes me think of the hand game - "here are the doors, here is the steeple...open the church, and see all the people!")
Thank you A M & J! yeh i like the last line too.
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