Thursday, April 5, 2012

DON’T BE BLUE....





Do I really feel blue to write a couple of blues?

Should I be feeling blue to write a couple of blues?

How can I write, where I have little or no clues!!


Just let go and let your creative juices flow

They say just let go and let your creative juices flow

But, the truth is I ain’t even feeling so low.


Now, I sh’d have a drink or two

C’mmon give me a drink or two

Oh! Shucks...this is making me tipsy than blue


What the hell! Now is the time to get real

What the heck! Now, let us get real

Forget blues; let us don our dancing shoes which are teal.


Common, let us jive, dive and drive ourselves crazy

Ohhh baby, let us jive dive and drive ourselves crazy

Let’s dance, come by my house don’t be lazy.




For - NaPoWriMo...DAY 5
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17 comments:

  1. PRIYANKA DEYApril 5, 2012 at 5:46 PM

    Let us Jive along! :D
    The blues it is! :D

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  2. UnknownApril 5, 2012 at 6:07 PM

    Gosh! Its too good :)

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  3. Autumn ElizaApril 5, 2012 at 7:11 PM

    Teal-coloured dancing shoes! Lemme see! Hey, d'you really dance? My feet are already tapping!
    -ELLE

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    1. JANUApril 5, 2012 at 9:34 PM

      I don't really dance Elle...glad you liked this.

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  4. Jessica MApril 5, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    This was great! I could soooo relate! ;) Seriously, it was a challenge today to really write a blues poem for me because I tend to be an optimist..but I tried! Great job on yours. :)

    Here's mine:

    http://ascendingthehills.blogspot.com/2012/04/poetry-challenge-door-wont-be-singing.html

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    1. JANUApril 5, 2012 at 9:35 PM

      Yeah...tough one. loved yours too Jessica.

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  5. Martha Jane OrlandoApril 5, 2012 at 8:17 PM

    Oh, yeah! Got me dancing to this rhythm! Well done!

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  6. Pat HattApril 5, 2012 at 9:25 PM

    Quite the rhythm and rhyme, very well done.

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  7. RekhaApril 5, 2012 at 10:53 PM

    Nice rhythm and beat.Quite a blues song. I enjoyed this call to jive.

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  8. Brian MillerApril 5, 2012 at 11:00 PM

    ha this was a bit of fun...blues, i dont need em, but i dont mind hearin' em sung

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  9. sulekkhaApril 5, 2012 at 11:23 PM

    Blues rocked today, happy and peppy poem.

    http://sulekharawat.com/2012/04/05/delusion/

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  10. The PoetApril 5, 2012 at 11:55 PM

    Hello Janu.
    I'm a happy person and love to sing & dance...it's how I start and end my days. Love the imagery & flow of your not so blues blues...I can see your pretty feet in your teal shoes...haha, I'm even rhyming unintentionally! (lol). Thanks for sharing.

    Empty Streams

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  11. TamekaApril 6, 2012 at 4:21 AM

    I liked your "non-blues" bluesy poem. Go girl!

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/04/lyric-fire-napowrimo-2012-day-5-of-30-poems-in-30-days-vanilla-blue.html

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  12. AdrieneApril 6, 2012 at 7:40 AM

    These blues made me smile! Very cool, Janaki! :-)

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