Oh my God, when i read "don't get too attached" about Elias, i thought it would be something completely different and now I end up crying. Now I'm starting to worry, both about the writing skills that had me in tears after just a few pages, and about what will happen next, since the beginning already hurts.
When I first saw Leon, I was so ready to bounce on that thang (I mean, see my username.) I didn't expect to be this SAD still over Elias... A DILF is here...But I'm still mourning...
Nevermind I am NOT to bounce on that thang. Wdym Eki and Athiel are moving out. Pls I'm like a maladjusted chihuahua I cannot handle the separation anxiety 😭😭😭😭😭😭
I've been reading this for a couple of days and I've only just reached chapter 3 and to avoid giving away any major spoilers I'll just say, Juliet, I hope you burn in hell bitch.
Okay, I can't take this anymore, I have to say it somewhere, so if you don't want spoilers (in case you haven't already) don't read this, I'm just letting off steam.
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For starters, WHAT THE FUCK, why did you have to make E stay alive in episode 3, it would have been better if he stayed dead, at least it wouldn't hurt as much and not to mention everything that involves Juliet afterwards, I hope that when chapter 4 comes out onwards they give her a minimally understandable reason as to why she is so overprotective of E, even if that doesn't excuse all the manipulation and how she controls her family, I'm not looking for her to really redeem herself or anything but just a reason to not hate her so much, It's just because I simply don't like reaching that level of hatred, how much is it?, well he earned the "privilege" of being the third addition to my list of (I need to change the name) characters that I wish death or worse on, and I don't know if it's just because of how well the creator of the story writes or if I simply touch on one of the few topics that bring out the worst in me. Anyway, once the story finally continues I only hope for two things: either they give Juliet that reason to at least "excuse" her overprotective behavior or that she suffers as much as possible.
P.S. Just in case anyone asks (or reads this in general) the other 2 characters on that list are Beth Carver from Trials in Tainted Space and Eliza Queen from BDCC, if you know maybe you understand me a little, if not, I'll leave it to you that one is a slaver with extra steps and a bitch and the other is a doctor/chemist and in both cases neither shows any kind of remorse and/or enjoy what they do, barely showing any appreciation for the lives of others other than their own. (Eliza is forgiven only a little, though in her case it's a bit more personal.)
Okay, last thing, I just want to clarify that if you notice any grammatical errors or anything like that, it's the translator's fault, since English is not my main language and I'm nowhere near mastering it, at least on the pronunciation and writing side, since I can understand it almost perfectly with the exception of words that I don't know how to translate.
Finally got back at reading this after some months and im pleasantly surprised with the emotional turns this plot has up until chapter 3.
The characters all have very unique and funny interactions in a way that is so comforting.
This IF is very good, the way the trauma is written is amazing. It is fascinating to have a text based IF talking about grief! <3
MAJOR SPOILERS BELOW
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Okay, Juliet, somehow, became WORST than I imagined, how COULD she do this??!! That's sick behavior right there, I am very curious to know how this plot twist is gonna be handled. Although, according to the game's description, Elias is not a LI in the game so(according to my understanding, nothing confirmed, i believe, but i didnt see much of the authors Tumblr though), welp
And, I think him being alive is especially hutful in Athiels route, argh. Im very invested.
My theory is that the game wont make Elias a LI even if his memory is back. Perhaps his memory is never coming back either. And we'll have to learn to accept that as a character growth point in the story.
nsfw, but would it be possible to just add a choice to let male mc to bottom for Elias in the Prologue instead of topping in the after dinner scene. I don’t really like topping that much 😭
Love the idea but the execution is really strange to me. Already joking around, talking and meeting people one day after you long-term partner's death took me right out of the emersion.
Choices are often pretty much the same just worded differently, this was very obvious when you ask Travis/Tracee if they are okay with being at your place. 6 answers that are all a variant of "I don't (really) believe you", not even one that's just "okay then" or anything along those lines. We are a grieving person who just lost their partner, all of the light-heartedness, joking, and banter feels extremely cold to me, like Elias/Ellie meant nothing to us.
Maybe you wanted it that way to make it easier for the player, I just wish you would have at least one route that lets the player actually grief and the writing reflect that.
This game made me cry so much 😭 I couldn't help but get attached to Elias in a very short time, he's a sweetheart 😭😭 This is a very good game! I love it!
Hello! Your writing is legitimately really compelling and I love the story so far! There is one thing I would like to point out and it's that I seem to be misgendered a few times? I'm playing a man with he/him pronouns and there was one time Elias referred to me as his girlfriend during dinner and the doctor referring to me as Mrs. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to the rewrite!
I really like this game, huhuhuhuhuu I really cried when reading it, your writing is really good! But I heard you are going to rewrite the story, is that true?
can't wait for the next chapter 🤌🤌🤌 constantly am rereading this. I'm on my 7th play through already. 10/10 the best romance IF I've found. Literally non stop tears, such a immersive story and unique plot. It's really engrossing and tragic. I love it 💯
The way you write is so beautiful! And all the characters have such depth I love getting their perspectives
how am I supposed to love after my girlfriend's death if every single person around me acts like a kid and her sister is an absolute bitch? lol the ROs need more depth to them, it's too much happening all around
I do agree that there are a lot of things happening; that's one of the reasons why I'm doing a rewrite to try to pace it more naturally. I tend to let my thoughts wander while writing or planning, so I get that it can put people off. As for the ROs lacking depth, well, I'll just have to try and do better next time—something I can't promise since I'm still learning as I go. Though, if it's too frustrating for you, it might just not be your cup of tea or how you envisioned the game going. I won't meet everyone's expectations, including yours. That's okay, it happens.
So sorry for the late reply, hope you're doing well.
I'm doing a rewrite at the moment. Started writing chapter 4 a while ago but decided to focus on the rewrite first. It'll probably take another month or so to finish the rewrite. (I'm trying to add and modify only stuff that really needs it, so hopefully it won't take as long as the prologue, which needed a lot of additions.)
Sadly, yes. A lot of things have been implemented, the UI being one of them. I know it's never ideal to start a game all over again, especially when it's already fairly big, but I promise there won't be any more rewrites hahaha. I'll also try to include an option to jump to chapter four for those who aren't interested in those changes and are just as impatient as I am to get to the latest chapter.
I require gasoline. If I can't have my house, they can't have theirs.
Yeah I wasn't expecting to like T so much, I thought E or A would be my favorite. But T turned out to be surprisingly sweet and charming and you know what, half vampire is a bonus! (But is L a vampire then, or did they somehow pull one?)
Tbh my second favorite is probably E (Eki not El tho El was awesome but now they don't remember the MC/PC 😭) because I JUST LOVE best friends to lovers or how they were kinda in a denial 😭🙏 (Oh I'm sure L could pull a vampire quite easily with all that flirting)
no fr i was searching for some games to play and found this was intrigued by the description only to mindlessly scroll a bit down to see that LMAO i stay getting spoiled sighs
It's alright i was just telling it to the person so they could edit their comment if they wanted (i already played all that's out weeks ago 🤭, so it wasn't a spoiler for me) and also thank you (Love the If/game btw, the characters are real and loveable)
guys i cried my heart out for elias , i felt every emotion there and her grieve was so heartbreaking. the nightmares and the empty house . and the cat , my god i really cant move on , elias was too good
Se um abençoado dia você quiser fazer um pov onde o/a Elias/Ellie estivesse vivos e sobrevividos. Além disso o jogo tá incrível, juro que chorei horrores quando nosso querido par morreu 😭!(Mas sigo com seu/sua irmão/irmã ❤️🔥)
Hey! Just wanted to say, don't know if you know about this but, there should be a short story from El's POV, where it's not them that dies but the Mc! It's just the morning but i thought i could let you know
I know about this (and I cried a lot more), but I say there should be just a few more scenes in the extras or even the full game (if the creator wants) where they have a peaceful life and maybe even the children they wanted so much or even the marriage and how it was and so on...
I love this game so much that I recommended it to my friend and she loved it.
I just miss this game because I can't have chemistry with any of the others other than Elias/Ellie😭😭
OHHHH GOD I HAD ONLY PLAYED THE FIRST CHAPTERS AND DIDN'T CONTINUE PLAYING BECAUSE I WAS SAD WITH HIM AND THEN I ENDED UP SEEING A COMMENT FROM YOU SAYING HE'S ALIVE?!!
I love this game and it motivated me even more 😆💯💥
lmao at least i helped a little, and i do agree it would be cool if there were more scenes with El! And dunno how many chapters this will have but i feel like there will be a lot more scenses with them
So that's why El's mother (Juliet but who cares) wouldn't let us to go to the funeral. BECAUSE THERE WASN'T ONE. And she probably wanted the Mc to move out so El can live there? It's possible since they now live with their parents and maybe Juliet wanted them to have somewhere they can live once they heal and can take care if themselves. ANYWAYS God i hate that woman with my whole heart, she lied about El's death WHY just why would she even do that??? Honestly i can't even sympathies with her, she saw how much the Mc was hurting because of it, after all someone they loved "died". I really want to know why she did it but i just know my Mc WON'T forgive her like idc she's mother of El and Athiel, what she did isn't really forgiveable. Maybe if she tried but THAT WOMAN EVEN HIT MC. Her child is still alive and she's acting as if the Mc killed them. Done ranting about my hate for Juliet for now 🤗
ALSO WHO THE F IS ROBIN AND WHY ARE YOU CALLING EL BABY 👊😤
AHHH I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THAT. I DEF THINK JULIET WANTED US TO LEAVE SO ELIAS CAN MOVE IN💔 THEN SHE TURNED IT AROUND ON US WITH EL'S DAD BY SAYING WE DIDN'T WANT EL BACK :(
JULIET IS SUCH A BITCH. :((
now she's trying to set El up with this mf named ROBIN?! LIKE WHO. NO. EL CLEARLY HAD A BAD RELATIONSHIP WITH THEM. EW. 😭🙏
AND SHE'S THREATENING SOMEONE TO KEEP EL AWAY FROM US :( I JUST WANT ELIAS BACK😭🙏
Nah cause i hate Juliet with my whole heart. She is honestly hurting the Pc and both of her children. I honestly don't understand what is her deal and why does she hate Pc so much, like we did nothing 😭.
About Robin i agree they probably had a bad relationship. From what we saw, It wasn't the best relationship but Robin maybe still wants El (which like, back off, El doesn't want you and is our almost fiancée)
I think 43 if im correct about the numbers by the ROs names in the introductions/thing (its 2am forgive me if that didnt make sense)- dont think it was openly said though
I'm so HOOKED! Youve just been spoiling us with all these updates. I am shook from the latest chapter 3 twist and i cant WAIT FOR MORE. You are my interactive fiction god. 100/100
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Oh my God, when i read "don't get too attached" about Elias, i thought it would be something completely different and now I end up crying. Now I'm starting to worry, both about the writing skills that had me in tears after just a few pages, and about what will happen next, since the beginning already hurts.
When I first saw Leon, I was so ready to bounce on that thang (I mean, see my username.) I didn't expect to be this SAD still over Elias... A DILF is here...But I'm still mourning...
The comment above was made while reading Prologue. On Chapter One now, and I am officially ready to bounce on that thang.
Nevermind I am NOT to bounce on that thang. Wdym Eki and Athiel are moving out. Pls I'm like a maladjusted chihuahua I cannot handle the separation anxiety 😭😭😭😭😭😭
Hey so Chapter 3. What in the godda
I've been reading this for a couple of days and I've only just reached chapter 3 and to avoid giving away any major spoilers I'll just say, Juliet, I hope you burn in hell bitch.
Okay, I can't take this anymore, I have to say it somewhere, so if you don't want spoilers (in case you haven't already) don't read this, I'm just letting off steam.
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For starters, WHAT THE FUCK, why did you have to make E stay alive in episode 3, it would have been better if he stayed dead, at least it wouldn't hurt as much and not to mention everything that involves Juliet afterwards, I hope that when chapter 4 comes out onwards they give her a minimally understandable reason as to why she is so overprotective of E, even if that doesn't excuse all the manipulation and how she controls her family, I'm not looking for her to really redeem herself or anything but just a reason to not hate her so much, It's just because I simply don't like reaching that level of hatred, how much is it?, well he earned the "privilege" of being the third addition to my list of (I need to change the name) characters that I wish death or worse on, and I don't know if it's just because of how well the creator of the story writes or if I simply touch on one of the few topics that bring out the worst in me. Anyway, once the story finally continues I only hope for two things: either they give Juliet that reason to at least "excuse" her overprotective behavior or that she suffers as much as possible.
P.S. Just in case anyone asks (or reads this in general) the other 2 characters on that list are Beth Carver from Trials in Tainted Space and Eliza Queen from BDCC, if you know maybe you understand me a little, if not, I'll leave it to you that one is a slaver with extra steps and a bitch and the other is a doctor/chemist and in both cases neither shows any kind of remorse and/or enjoy what they do, barely showing any appreciation for the lives of others other than their own. (Eliza is forgiven only a little, though in her case it's a bit more personal.)
Okay, last thing, I just want to clarify that if you notice any grammatical errors or anything like that, it's the translator's fault, since English is not my main language and I'm nowhere near mastering it, at least on the pronunciation and writing side, since I can understand it almost perfectly with the exception of words that I don't know how to translate.
im so invested in this 😭 T is so sweet
Finally got back at reading this after some months and im pleasantly surprised with the emotional turns this plot has up until chapter 3.
The characters all have very unique and funny interactions in a way that is so comforting.
This IF is very good, the way the trauma is written is amazing. It is fascinating to have a text based IF talking about grief! <3
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Okay, Juliet, somehow, became WORST than I imagined, how COULD she do this??!! That's sick behavior right there, I am very curious to know how this plot twist is gonna be handled. Although, according to the game's description, Elias is not a LI in the game so(according to my understanding, nothing confirmed, i believe, but i didnt see much of the authors Tumblr though), welp
And, I think him being alive is especially hutful in Athiels route, argh. Im very invested.
My theory is that the game wont make Elias a LI even if his memory is back. Perhaps his memory is never coming back either. And we'll have to learn to accept that as a character growth point in the story.
Major spoilers
Actually Eli IS an LI. It's stated on the author's tumblr if you choose val(the friendship route) you automatically get on their route
and you can ditch the LI whose route you are in to go after him so... uh maximum angst if you go for that on athiel's route?
Tho there is going to be two polys added next update ; Eli/Ekissa and T/Ekissa I think both are V polys so you don't always have to ditch the LIs
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WHAT!!//?? I DIDN'T know that, wooooooow
Poor Athiel in that route, maaan I gotta try that route in friendship's path, thanks for telling me T-T , I gotta check the authors Tumblr more often
And here I thought the game coudnt be more hurtful\emotional hahahag
I am so READY
Really late but spoilers 💔
I actually think Elias is a LI :) I think you're automatically put with him when you don't pick a romantic route/you stick with Vaylin ;)
No problems! People warned me about that. ^^ Very excited about the next chapters.
Always feels like I’m actually going through all this heartbreak in real time when I replay this😭
i got attached... and then heartbroken... TWICE! D:
nsfw, but would it be possible to just add a choice to let male mc to bottom for Elias in the Prologue instead of topping in the after dinner scene. I don’t really like topping that much 😭
I thought the same. I am by all means not a top nor do I like to be, so I prefer my characters’ preferences to be like mine.
Love the idea but the execution is really strange to me. Already joking around, talking and meeting people one day after you long-term partner's death took me right out of the emersion.
Choices are often pretty much the same just worded differently, this was very obvious when you ask Travis/Tracee if they are okay with being at your place. 6 answers that are all a variant of "I don't (really) believe you", not even one that's just "okay then" or anything along those lines. We are a grieving person who just lost their partner, all of the light-heartedness, joking, and banter feels extremely cold to me, like Elias/Ellie meant nothing to us.
Maybe you wanted it that way to make it easier for the player, I just wish you would have at least one route that lets the player actually grief and the writing reflect that.
Hey, so I got attached to Elias, and now I can't move on through the prologue. Guys I'm scared 😭
im assuming you finally emotionally hurt yourself by reading past the prologue like the rest of us (we need more traumatized people trust)
Yep, had me full on ugly crying in public
hate it herein the best way possibleThis game made me cry so much 😭 I couldn't help but get attached to Elias in a very short time, he's a sweetheart 😭😭 This is a very good game! I love it!
Wouldn't there be an option to resurrect Elias?😭Hello! Your writing is legitimately really compelling and I love the story so far! There is one thing I would like to point out and it's that I seem to be misgendered a few times? I'm playing a man with he/him pronouns and there was one time Elias referred to me as his girlfriend during dinner and the doctor referring to me as Mrs. Other than that I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to the rewrite!
Just found this; and boy it is amazing. Beautiful, sweet and tragic. Thank you for this masterpiece, I love you!💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙💙
I really like this game, huhuhuhuhuu I really cried when reading it, your writing is really good! But I heard you are going to rewrite the story, is that true?
yeah she's already finished rewriting the prologue n she plans on uploading everything at the same time along w chapter 4
There must be something wrong with Juliet cuz i GASPED after I realized that wild ass plot twist
can't wait for the next chapter 🤌🤌🤌 constantly am rereading this. I'm on my 7th play through already. 10/10 the best romance IF I've found. Literally non stop tears, such a immersive story and unique plot. It's really engrossing and tragic. I love it 💯
The way you write is so beautiful! And all the characters have such depth I love getting their perspectives
When it said it ended....bro....this game is freaking amazing! I have never felt the characters like this before.I adore it. Wish you well, Echo.
I literally dislike every single RO in this lmao
why? 😭 I understand everyone has their preference so that's why I'm asking. (I personally love every RO)
how am I supposed to love after my girlfriend's death if every single person around me acts like a kid and her sister is an absolute bitch? lol the ROs need more depth to them, it's too much happening all around
I do agree that there are a lot of things happening; that's one of the reasons why I'm doing a rewrite to try to pace it more naturally. I tend to let my thoughts wander while writing or planning, so I get that it can put people off. As for the ROs lacking depth, well, I'll just have to try and do better next time—something I can't promise since I'm still learning as I go. Though, if it's too frustrating for you, it might just not be your cup of tea or how you envisioned the game going. I won't meet everyone's expectations, including yours. That's okay, it happens.
Thanks for your input.
Is chapter four in the works and if so how far is it. Pls I wanna know bc i cant wait for more
So sorry for the late reply, hope you're doing well.
I'm doing a rewrite at the moment. Started writing chapter 4 a while ago but decided to focus on the rewrite first. It'll probably take another month or so to finish the rewrite. (I'm trying to add and modify only stuff that really needs it, so hopefully it won't take as long as the prologue, which needed a lot of additions.)
Does that mean that we have to play the game from the start when the update comes?
Sadly, yes. A lot of things have been implemented, the UI being one of them. I know it's never ideal to start a game all over again, especially when it's already fairly big, but I promise there won't be any more rewrites hahaha. I'll also try to include an option to jump to chapter four for those who aren't interested in those changes and are just as impatient as I am to get to the latest chapter.
Hope that helps!
Love this IF, Travis is my favorite so far.
I'm going to fight Juliet and Robin.I can help if you want, anything i need to bring?You are right this IF is Amazing 🤗 and T is LSOJDSODIDJ love them, I'm still pretty sure they're part vampire tho
I require gasoline. If I can't have my house, they can't have theirs.Yeah I wasn't expecting to like T so much, I thought E or A would be my favorite. But T turned out to be surprisingly sweet and charming and you know what, half vampire is a bonus! (But is L a vampire then, or did they somehow pull one?)
I'll look for some and bring it with meTbh my second favorite is probably E (Eki not El tho El was awesome but now they don't remember the MC/PC 😭) because I JUST LOVE best friends to lovers or how they were kinda in a denial 😭🙏 (Oh I'm sure L could pull a vampire quite easily with all that flirting)
Thats a very captivating IF. 5 out of 5 stars for me
.. Reminded me VN "Remember ME" while reading
ok way to break my heart now im going to jump off a bus💔💔
OH MY GOD! I LOVET IT ALL, PLEASE KEEP THESE COMMINGGGG!!!!
don't wanna sound mean but at least give a spoiler warning for new players please
no fr i was searching for some games to play and found this was intrigued by the description only to mindlessly scroll a bit down to see that LMAO i stay getting spoiled sighs
Deleted it because of spoiler—sorry, didn't see it until now :((
It's alright i was just telling it to the person so they could edit their comment if they wanted (i already played all that's out weeks ago 🤭, so it wasn't a spoiler for me) and also thank you (Love the If/game btw, the characters are real and loveable)
I feel horrible about moving on after Els death! But T is so sweet 😭
guys i cried my heart out for elias , i felt every emotion there and her grieve was so heartbreaking. the nightmares and the empty house . and the cat , my god i really cant move on , elias was too good
Se um abençoado dia você quiser fazer um pov onde o/a Elias/Ellie estivesse vivos e sobrevividos. Além disso o jogo tá incrível, juro que chorei horrores quando nosso querido par morreu 😭!(Mas sigo com seu/sua irmão/irmã ❤️🔥)
Esperando ansiosamente por novas atualizações!
Hey! Just wanted to say, don't know if you know about this but, there should be a short story from El's POV, where it's not them that dies but the Mc! It's just the morning but i thought i could let you know
I know about this (and I cried a lot more), but I say there should be just a few more scenes in the extras or even the full game (if the creator wants) where they have a peaceful life and maybe even the children they wanted so much or even the marriage and how it was and so on...
I love this game so much that I recommended it to my friend and she loved it.
I just miss this game because I can't have chemistry with any of the others other than Elias/Ellie😭😭
We want at least a happy ending from them 🙇♀️
OHHHH GOD I HAD ONLY PLAYED THE FIRST CHAPTERS AND DIDN'T CONTINUE PLAYING BECAUSE I WAS SAD WITH HIM AND THEN I ENDED UP SEEING A COMMENT FROM YOU SAYING HE'S ALIVE?!!
I love this game and it motivated me even more 😆💯💥
lmao at least i helped a little, and i do agree it would be cool if there were more scenes with El! And dunno how many chapters this will have but i feel like there will be a lot more scenses with them
Just wanted to point out something
There's her number instead of his number when we are talking about the MC's dad.
Soo just saying ig
Will fix it when I'm done with the rewrite, thx!!
only started but ARE YOU KIDDING ME JULIET?!!
!!!SPOILERS!!!
So that's why El's mother (Juliet but who cares) wouldn't let us to go to the funeral. BECAUSE THERE WASN'T ONE. And she probably wanted the Mc to move out so El can live there? It's possible since they now live with their parents and maybe Juliet wanted them to have somewhere they can live once they heal and can take care if themselves. ANYWAYS God i hate that woman with my whole heart, she lied about El's death WHY just why would she even do that??? Honestly i can't even sympathies with her, she saw how much the Mc was hurting because of it, after all someone they loved "died". I really want to know why she did it but i just know my Mc WON'T forgive her like idc she's mother of El and Athiel, what she did isn't really forgiveable. Maybe if she tried but THAT WOMAN EVEN HIT MC. Her child is still alive and she's acting as if the Mc killed them. Done ranting about my hate for Juliet for now 🤗
ALSO WHO THE F IS ROBIN AND WHY ARE YOU CALLING EL BABY 👊😤
YESS. I LIVE FOR THE JULIET HATE😭🙏.
Anyways spoilers bc I'm ranting too
AHHH I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THAT. I DEF THINK JULIET WANTED US TO LEAVE SO ELIAS CAN MOVE IN💔 THEN SHE TURNED IT AROUND ON US WITH EL'S DAD BY SAYING WE DIDN'T WANT EL BACK :(
JULIET IS SUCH A BITCH. :((
now she's trying to set El up with this mf named ROBIN?! LIKE WHO. NO. EL CLEARLY HAD A BAD RELATIONSHIP WITH THEM. EW. 😭🙏
AND SHE'S THREATENING SOMEONE TO KEEP EL AWAY FROM US :( I JUST WANT ELIAS BACK😭🙏
Giving kinda spoiler warning for new players
Nah cause i hate Juliet with my whole heart. She is honestly hurting the Pc and both of her children. I honestly don't understand what is her deal and why does she hate Pc so much, like we did nothing 😭.
About Robin i agree they probably had a bad relationship. From what we saw, It wasn't the best relationship but Robin maybe still wants El (which like, back off, El doesn't want you and is our almost fiancée)
Played this 2 months ago and oh my goodness WHY DON'T I GET A NOTIFICATION WHEN IT UPDATES 😭😭
We were left on cliffhanger, worst is the chapter came out 24 days ago I'M LATE
I don't know if it said or if I might have just missed it, but how old is Luna?
I think 43 if im correct about the numbers by the ROs names in the introductions/thing (its 2am forgive me if that didnt make sense)- dont think it was openly said though
Oh, I completely missed those, lol. Thank you!
No problem! （｡>‿‿<｡ ）
Me cri
I love this game so much! Thank you for making it <3
This game is just it hits the spot idk.
spoilers below cause i don’t ruin yalls day
didn’t listen to the elias warning at the beginning and got way too attached to him… paid the price. now the little bitch doesn’t remember me :(
“mom I’m so hungry I could elli-“
Was stalking you a little 😌 and IT WAS YOU WHO MADE THIS COMMENT? 😭😭
AHAH YES🙏😭
Juliet watch your back I’m coming for you.
I just started reading this and OH MY GOD I'M ALREADY SOBBING. I don't know if I'm just too emotional or what.
This story has me hooked line and sinker lol. I look forward to more of it!!!
I'm so HOOKED! Youve just been spoiling us with all these updates. I am shook from the latest chapter 3 twist and i cant WAIT FOR MORE. You are my interactive fiction god. 100/100
Love this a lot! There are js some glitches for characters because sometimes the switch names to the other gender.
I also get this gender switch at times. Thats the only glitch ive noticed
Dang, sorry about that. I'll get it fixed when I'm done with the rewrite :)