I'm sorry this is 5 months late... I've only learned that there were comments that required approval-
I don't have a Discord server at the moment, but I do post updates on my Twitter(@antares252), Tumblr(@antagames) or Bsky(@antares252) accounts. Mainly Twitter.
I also post bi-monthly devlog updates which I've paused due to personal circumstances, but I do hope to resume those update logs soon!
hiii i love this game and im willing to pay full release even tho i dont waste money on gafmes like this, when do u thibnk u can release the ggame around in 2026?
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
i will choose Vicenzo cuz like i love two faced ppl
-What's your favorite scene/event?
i reallu liked everything fr
-Are you interested in playing the full release?
(The full game will be PAID)
I'm not sure yet, for all we know, it could once again get delayed. I will close the donation campaign once the game is near completion, so if you're not sure about paying yet, feel free to wait for announcements and follow my account for updates.
I played the demo a few times already year or so back...I read through the whole thing they have written and it says Full Release 2025... Does that mean it's going to be released at the end of the year maybe in December?
Unfortunate family things happened at the start of the year, hampering the development by lot. I haven't updated the front page yet, but I have to delay the release once again🙏
Hmmm... I works on my end. Try going to options, enable Skip Unseen Text, then open the quick menu (click the flower on the bottom right), then enable skip until the part you can't get through. See if it will get through it.
I had bought the Ko-Fi thing in the past and we talked before on that site my question will i get access here or where when the next build update happens? Im using the mobile port just to let you know
I will be sending Itchio keys through the contact info link included in the downloads from both here and ko-fi, which is why it's important to fill it up!
Although I might upload the game itself on ko-fi too since a few people who donated through ko-fi still hadn't sent their forms (granted, there's still a lot of time for that) and there's no way for me to contact ko-fi donors ^^"
I LOVE THIS GAME!! Its so fun and entertaining. i am so down to buy the full released version in the future! (when I am not broke anymore LOL) I tried this game on android and the only problem is that I can't save? I couldn't find the button to save so I played it all night until the end of demo..
To save, you open the quick menu by clicking the flower at the bottom right of the text box. It's also available for the PC version, you just have to hover on the flower.
I've added a tutorial on that, but it's not included in the demo version/s (the tutorial, that is).
The buttons are small though, and the android version is currently a direct port of the PC version, but I'll be making a more Android friendly UI after the full release (whenever that may be 😅)
Am I the only one having this problem? I'm playing on the browser version (biggest mistake ever) and I'm stuck on this part. No matter what I do, I can't get past this text box.
Okay I just wanna say- that this is the first ever demo that I've played all the way through, and was so disappointed that it already ended. Literally this has become one of my favorite visual novels ever in existence, and I literally cannot wait for the full release!! <33
ughhh I love this sm. it reminds me of all those webtoons, and its damn good. though I will say, she has so much more willpower than I do rotflmaoooooo
I love everytime the MC has the option to retaliate, and not put up with the classic otome mc treatment, I like their reactions too. It makes it feel more easily relatable with the isekai
-Are you interested in playing the full release?
(The full game will be PAID)
Definitely, and I have the payment method.
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
for me yup, though I don't usually go for villians so probably can't comment too much on it :d
-Other comments are welcome!
I love the mystery in the ML. I also like the "side chars (protagonist)" Henry, Twin brother and Estelle. I hope that they're not forgotten once the route is chosen. but in any case, I really love this VN! I've been waiting for something like this for a while XD
Hold on I loved this!! I got really involved in the story I want to see it through!!
Answering to the questions:
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
I need to see more. If I don't feel on equal grounds with Edel and retaliate, I'm not sure I'd go for him first.
-What's your favorite scene/event?
Maybe right after we leave the room with Edel and he unmasks and talks. But I liked everything.
-Are you interested in playing the full release?
(The full game will be PAID)
Yep, depending on price I guess.
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
I think remembering the very first scene does it.
-Other comments are welcome!
I really wanted to get physical with Edel :) as in throw fists :) It feels like they are doing with MC whatever they want and I'd like her to have some agency or make some moves on her end.
oh wow i wasn't expecting a reply from the creator, that's good to know! you're a very talented solo dev, i've never seen someone pull off coding, writing, art and voice acting!
Yup! It is! Sorry for the lack of updates. The announcement for the pause of devlog updates was in another game's devlog.
For more frequent updates, you can check my Bsky or Twitter account! The latest post I've done on this game on my Bsky account was 11days ago, and before that was around 2 months ago.
LOVEDDDDDDDDDD this game. The voice acting was really good for when it was there.
The character design was beautiful. Especially the mcs and the white hair guy o(〃＾▽＾〃)o. The mls were cute too but i REALLY REALLY liked the white hair guy whos with pink hair girl ( Im really bad w names)
I played this game on Android, and here are my thoughts!
Storyline:
The story is really engaging—it made me want to keep going just to find out what would happen next! The number of bad endings is insane (in a good way), and I actually love that. It really makes every decision feel like it matters, and that adds a lot of weight to the choices you make.
UI:
I found the UI a little tricky to navigate on mobile. The buttons (like save, load, etc.) felt a bit small, and I had a hard time tapping them accurately. I think the hitboxes might be a little bit tiny—just something to consider for better accessibility. (Though it might just be a me problem.)
Bugs:
I did notice a few bugs, like some scenes replaying after I load a save. It’s nothing too major, and I’m guessing it’ll be fixed in future updates.
Characters:
I love the villains—they’re written so well and really stand out. Super memorable and intense!
Overall, I’m really looking forward to where this game goes next. Great work!
About the Android UI, I did address that in the FAQs, and here as well. The current version is a direct port just so Android-only players can play for now. Thank you for testing it out❤️
Vincenzo's, definitely. I quite enjoy how snakey he is. He's quite powerful even if he appears harmless. I would love to see him be vulnerable at some point in the game (assuming the story allowed it) (yes, i'm saying make him cry, for fun). Edel seems very interesting too and, from reading other people's comments, he seems quite popular too, so I'd obviously play his route too. Still, hands down, Vincenzo first.
-What's your favorite scene/event?
I've seen someone say nothing jumps out, but actually I quite enjoyed the scene where MC is talking to the prince in Vincenzo's garden. If you choose to hold back, he will make a remark about Vincenzo being a snake and "moving fast" (although he doesn't seem like he'd be better than him), then the count swoops in to put an end to the interaction. If you choose to punch him, however, Vincenzo swoops in right away.
-Are you interested in playing the full release?
(The full game will be PAID)
Yes. Honestly, I usually come to itch.io because I enjoy being able to play great games without having to pay for them or, if the game is behind a paywall, there's usually a free DEMO of it on the creator's page. I grew up poor, so I'm always hesitant to pay for things like games. This is mostly out of fear of having "wasted money" if I end up enjoying them less than I thought I would. Playing this DEMO, I feel that it would be worth my money.
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
As of right now, they're both shrouded in mystery, so it's hard to discern whether they're "villainous" enough. Vincenzo reads as a manipulative, dangerous man, while Edel seems to always be one wrong word from murdering MC for his own amusement, so I would say so.
I think writing villains is quite hard when the public is meant to love them, if you make them too evil, they might become hard to enjoy, but if you make them too god they'll just be antiheroes. Still, I feel like you've found the perfects balance with both Edel and Vincenzo.
Just played the demo last night and loved it! The humor and self awareness of the MC makes it so fun. Both LI were really intriguing so I had a hard time choosing which to focus on for a bit. Count Brillhart (sorry, Count Vicenzo) is a babe. But then I saw Edel’s little murderous intent face and it was done. I’m locked in. I’m invested. And I’m eagerly awaiting the release of this full game.
My name is Zogar, and I am a fan of your visual novel Thorn for the Villain~ Reincarnated as an Extra in an Otome Game?!. I really enjoyed the story and characters, and I believe that Russian-speaking players would also love to experience your game.
I would like to ask for your permission to translate Thorn for the Villain into Russian. I have experience in translating visual novels, and I aim to provide a high-quality translation that stays true to the original writing. If you agree, I can share my progress with you to ensure that the translation meets your expectations.
Please let me know if you would be interested in this. I would love to help make your game accessible to a wider audience.
When are you planning to release it this year? Follow up! I really want to play the full version, but I cannot make purchases on itch.io... is there any future plan to adding it to steam or any other digital game site?
I still don't have an exact date at the moment. There's a possibility of another delay especially due to sudden unforeseen circumstances. I'll be posting a devlog announcement if there is already a date. Feel free to follow me on Bsky for more frequent updates.
As for Steam, that's already mentioned in the FAQs devlog (linked in the front page). I also have a Ko-Fi store where it'll also be released (and I believe they should also have more payment options).
"Whose route would you choose first? And why?" I am a rebel by heart, so naturally my first instinct was to refuse the guy who tried to stronghand his way into an engagement. (Although I DO admire him for his trick, I much prefer manipulation over force.)
That said, the Butler intrigued me right from the start. And he kept getting better at every turn. (and bad end) ^_^
-"What's your favorite scene/event? " Hrm... Nothing actually stands out in the Demo. Other than the Bad Ends of course. lol
-Are you interested in playing the full release?
(The full game will be PAID)
I'd happily pay for this game if it was on Steam. Doubly so if it was a really long game. I'd probably buy any DCL content too.
Unless, of course, it turns out that the love interests have some sort of hidden do-gooder motive shit. I am SO sick and tired of thinking a character is amazing and evil only to find out he's doing it to help orphans or save someone or have a robin hood complex or some other anti-hero shait. >_>
-"Are the LIs villainous enough for you?"
So far they seem to be. Provided I don't discover the above-mentioned later on in the game.
If he takes over the kingdom, he should be a tyrant, not a benevolent ruler.
If he's a killer, he should kill for profit, not for some justice/just cause. (If he is just loyal to his master and just plain enjoys killing, that's fine too.)
In short: A villain should never be able to truly justify their actions. (They may try to, but everyone sees a villain for a villain. Ask anyone, and they'll still say the Joker is a villain, regardless what the Joker justify his actions with. Same goes for every true villain out there.)
I don't know what the goals of that organization is, or why they do it, but I will be VERY happy if it's a plot to gain power because they are power-hungry, or get rich or any other selfish and self-centered goals.
(Or if the love interest leaders are exploiting everyone else in the organization, like the Joker does in the Clown War when he pretends he has some just cause but in reality he just want to burn Gotham down to lure batman back cuz he misses his beloved... Now THAT is a complicated love interest, and a posterboy for unhealthy relationships. ...not necessarily in a bad way, as long as it stays in a game. Which is something I don't say often. lol But I got off topic. My apologies....)
It's fine if they love the main character and want to treat her nice (although I am fine with them being a bit cruel as well, but people have different tastes there), but they shouldn't care about homeless people or starving puppies and whatnot.
So as long as they are what they appear to be in the Demo, then they are villainous enough. ^_^
(If you ever plan to make a yandere game, please tell me. You may actually manage to create a realistic love interest in it that is capable of both being nice and cruel based on if the mc accept or reject them. lol )
--
As a side-note tho, I will say this:
I don't actually mind that Brillheart try and strongarm you into the stuff he does. I enjoy being able to rebel against it at every turn. It may be a little irritating, but there is a dark sense of pleasure in being able to lash out at him and reject him when he tries.
(I may even try his route at a later point. My admiration for him rises at every cunning and manipulative trick he pulls. I'm just stubborn when it comes to people trying to force me. lol)
The fact that you CAN lash out and reject him --or try-- that is a VERY good thing. It makes the game feel a whole lot better to play.
Even if it had come with a bad end, being able to rebel against things, even impossible to change things, feels very good.
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Do you have a discord server with all potential update info? if not that's totally fine. I just finished the demo and I'm OBSESSED
I'm sorry this is 5 months late... I've only learned that there were comments that required approval-
I don't have a Discord server at the moment, but I do post updates on my Twitter(@antares252), Tumblr(@antagames) or Bsky(@antares252) accounts. Mainly Twitter.
I also post bi-monthly devlog updates which I've paused due to personal circumstances, but I do hope to resume those update logs soon!
really good
I NEED MORE PLEASE IM LOSING IT
i love the game
MC's emotes and inner monologues got me laughing hard 🤣
Yes😝😝😝
I tried installing the APK and apparently it's an update to Trapped With Jester instead of, the game
I've had some people say that the icon is Trapped with Jester; have you tried opening it?
I'll redownload it and update you
Oh yeah, I just tested it. It's just Trapped with Jester in name, but it's the right game when you open it👌
it does say it's an experimental buildApp not installed, something about invalid package
Do you have a screenshot?
Was there a message before that?
Otherwise, it might be a version issue, which I couldn't really do anything about atm 😔
will it be released on steam
for me, I personally prefer to buy games on steam tho..
It's stated in the FAQs!
Short answer: Possible, but I can't promise anything🙏
oh yaay
THIS GAMES A MASTERPIECE!! PLEASE RELEASE THE EXTENTED DEMO SOONNNNN I NEED TO KNOW WHATS GONNA HAPPENNN TOT
hiii i love this game and im willing to pay full release even tho i dont waste money on gafmes like this, when do u thibnk u can release the ggame around in 2026?
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
i will choose Vicenzo cuz like i love two faced ppl
-What's your favorite scene/event?
i reallu liked everything fr
-Are you interested in playing the full release? (The full game will be PAID)
ofcourse
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
yes
I'm not sure yet, for all we know, it could once again get delayed. I will close the donation campaign once the game is near completion, so if you're not sure about paying yet, feel free to wait for announcements and follow my account for updates.
im in love with Vicenzo (if that was his name) I just came back to see when it would be released i love your art style🥲
I played the demo a few times already year or so back...I read through the whole thing they have written and it says Full Release 2025... Does that mean it's going to be released at the end of the year maybe in December?
Updates were posted on Twitter
Unfortunate family things happened at the start of the year, hampering the development by lot. I haven't updated the front page yet, but I have to delay the release once again🙏
I completely understand, sorry about that. Hopefully everything is right with you and your family! o7
I downloaded the android version but it keeps blocking at the first scene where the OG FL either says nothing or confesses her feelings for the OG ML
Blocking? Like, it's not loading?
yes exactly
Hmmm... I works on my end. Try going to options, enable Skip Unseen Text, then open the quick menu (click the flower on the bottom right), then enable skip until the part you can't get through. See if it will get through it.
I had bought the Ko-Fi thing in the past and we talked before on that site my question will i get access here or where when the next build update happens? Im using the mobile port just to let you know
I will be sending Itchio keys through the contact info link included in the downloads from both here and ko-fi, which is why it's important to fill it up!
Although I might upload the game itself on ko-fi too since a few people who donated through ko-fi still hadn't sent their forms (granted, there's still a lot of time for that) and there's no way for me to contact ko-fi donors ^^"
I LOVE THIS GAME!! Its so fun and entertaining. i am so down to buy the full released version in the future! (when I am not broke anymore LOL) I tried this game on android and the only problem is that I can't save? I couldn't find the button to save so I played it all night until the end of demo..
To save, you open the quick menu by clicking the flower at the bottom right of the text box. It's also available for the PC version, you just have to hover on the flower.
I've added a tutorial on that, but it's not included in the demo version/s (the tutorial, that is).
The buttons are small though, and the android version is currently a direct port of the PC version, but I'll be making a more Android friendly UI after the full release (whenever that may be 😅)
Oh i see thank you :)
Am I the only one having this problem? I'm playing on the browser version (biggest mistake ever) and I'm stuck on this part. No matter what I do, I can't get past this text box.
Enter is not working? It works for me...
If it still doesn't work, then it's better to download the demo 😅
Thank you!
i'm OBSESSED, this was so good omggg, the ending had me so shocked, even this demo is so well made, definitely will be waiting for the full game!!
Cadê a tradução Brasileira?😭😭😭
Okay I just wanna say- that this is the first ever demo that I've played all the way through, and was so disappointed that it already ended. Literally this has become one of my favorite visual novels ever in existence, and I literally cannot wait for the full release!! <33
ughhh I love this sm. it reminds me of all those webtoons, and its damn good. though I will say, she has so much more willpower than I do rotflmaoooooo
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
Vincenzo, Edel is scary to me XDDD
-What's your favorite scene/event?
I love everytime the MC has the option to retaliate, and not put up with the classic otome mc treatment, I like their reactions too. It makes it feel more easily relatable with the isekai
-Are you interested in playing the full release? (The full game will be PAID)
Definitely, and I have the payment method.
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
for me yup, though I don't usually go for villians so probably can't comment too much on it :d
-Other comments are welcome!
I love the mystery in the ML. I also like the "side chars (protagonist)" Henry, Twin brother and Estelle. I hope that they're not forgotten once the route is chosen. but in any case, I really love this VN! I've been waiting for something like this for a while XD
Hold on I loved this!! I got really involved in the story I want to see it through!!
Answering to the questions:
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
I need to see more. If I don't feel on equal grounds with Edel and retaliate, I'm not sure I'd go for him first.
-What's your favorite scene/event?
Maybe right after we leave the room with Edel and he unmasks and talks. But I liked everything.
-Are you interested in playing the full release? (The full game will be PAID)
Yep, depending on price I guess.
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
I think remembering the very first scene does it.
-Other comments are welcome!
I really wanted to get physical with Edel :) as in throw fists :) It feels like they are doing with MC whatever they want and I'd like her to have some agency or make some moves on her end.
BRO THAT SERVANT JST KILLED ME??? WTF I DIDNT DO NTH!
:O
I loved playing the demo! Super excited for the full release!!
请问这个游戏有没有中文
No localization plans at the moment.
so excited for this game u have no idea <333
this was amazing <3 does anyone know when the full game will come out?
No exact date yet. It might get delayed again, but rest assured, it's still being worked on!
oh wow i wasn't expecting a reply from the creator, that's good to know! you're a very talented solo dev, i've never seen someone pull off coding, writing, art and voice acting!
it’s gonna be paid though
Yup! It is! Sorry for the lack of updates. The announcement for the pause of devlog updates was in another game's devlog.
For more frequent updates, you can check my Bsky or Twitter account! The latest post I've done on this game on my Bsky account was 11days ago, and before that was around 2 months ago.
LOVEDDDDDDDDDD this game. The voice acting was really good for when it was there.
The character design was beautiful. Especially the mcs and the white hair guy o(〃＾▽＾〃)o. The mls were cute too but i REALLY REALLY liked the white hair guy whos with pink hair girl ( Im really bad w names)
This should be illegal, makes me love a game and leave me waiting for moreeee <3
really good
I played this game on Android, and here are my thoughts!
Storyline:
The story is really engaging—it made me want to keep going just to find out what would happen next! The number of bad endings is insane (in a good way), and I actually love that. It really makes every decision feel like it matters, and that adds a lot of weight to the choices you make.
UI:
I found the UI a little tricky to navigate on mobile. The buttons (like save, load, etc.) felt a bit small, and I had a hard time tapping them accurately. I think the hitboxes might be a little bit tiny—just something to consider for better accessibility. (Though it might just be a me problem.)
Bugs:
I did notice a few bugs, like some scenes replaying after I load a save. It’s nothing too major, and I’m guessing it’ll be fixed in future updates.
Characters:
I love the villains—they’re written so well and really stand out. Super memorable and intense!
Overall, I’m really looking forward to where this game goes next. Great work!
About the Android UI, I did address that in the FAQs, and here as well.
The current version is a direct port just so Android-only players can play for now.
Thank you for testing it out❤️
Thank you for the clarification. I'm really excited for this!
Will this be on Steam in the future for full release?
It's stated in the FAQs
Thank you!
help I keep dying (TT) I never get the not dying ending
Do you still need help?
not anymore thanks tho I found the help notes in the chat :>
will the full version be paid? if so, how much would it cost?
It's in the FAQs, but note that it may be subject to change.
-Whose route would you choose first? And why?
Vincenzo's, definitely. I quite enjoy how snakey he is. He's quite powerful even if he appears harmless. I would love to see him be vulnerable at some point in the game (assuming the story allowed it) (yes, i'm saying make him cry, for fun). Edel seems very interesting too and, from reading other people's comments, he seems quite popular too, so I'd obviously play his route too. Still, hands down, Vincenzo first.
-What's your favorite scene/event?
I've seen someone say nothing jumps out, but actually I quite enjoyed the scene where MC is talking to the prince in Vincenzo's garden. If you choose to hold back, he will make a remark about Vincenzo being a snake and "moving fast" (although he doesn't seem like he'd be better than him), then the count swoops in to put an end to the interaction. If you choose to punch him, however, Vincenzo swoops in right away.
-Are you interested in playing the full release? (The full game will be PAID)
Yes. Honestly, I usually come to itch.io because I enjoy being able to play great games without having to pay for them or, if the game is behind a paywall, there's usually a free DEMO of it on the creator's page. I grew up poor, so I'm always hesitant to pay for things like games. This is mostly out of fear of having "wasted money" if I end up enjoying them less than I thought I would. Playing this DEMO, I feel that it would be worth my money.
-Are the LIs villainous enough for you?
As of right now, they're both shrouded in mystery, so it's hard to discern whether they're "villainous" enough. Vincenzo reads as a manipulative, dangerous man, while Edel seems to always be one wrong word from murdering MC for his own amusement, so I would say so.
I think writing villains is quite hard when the public is meant to love them, if you make them too evil, they might become hard to enjoy, but if you make them too god they'll just be antiheroes. Still, I feel like you've found the perfects balance with both Edel and Vincenzo.
I look forward to the full release, good job! ^^
Just played the demo last night and loved it! The humor and self awareness of the MC makes it so fun.
Both LI were really intriguing so I had a hard time choosing which to focus on for a bit. Count Brillhart (sorry, Count Vicenzo) is a babe.
But then I saw Edel’s little murderous intent face and it was done. I’m locked in. I’m invested. And I’m eagerly awaiting the release of this full game.
Dear Anta,
My name is Zogar, and I am a fan of your visual novel Thorn for the Villain~ Reincarnated as an Extra in an Otome Game?!. I really enjoyed the story and characters, and I believe that Russian-speaking players would also love to experience your game.
I would like to ask for your permission to translate Thorn for the Villain into Russian. I have experience in translating visual novels, and I aim to provide a high-quality translation that stays true to the original writing. If you agree, I can share my progress with you to ensure that the translation meets your expectations.
Please let me know if you would be interested in this. I would love to help make your game accessible to a wider audience.
Looking forward to your response!
Best regards,
Zogar
When are you planning to release it this year? Follow up! I really want to play the full version, but I cannot make purchases on itch.io... is there any future plan to adding it to steam or any other digital game site?
I still don't have an exact date at the moment. There's a possibility of another delay especially due to sudden unforeseen circumstances. I'll be posting a devlog announcement if there is already a date. Feel free to follow me on Bsky for more frequent updates.
As for Steam, that's already mentioned in the FAQs devlog (linked in the front page). I also have a Ko-Fi store where it'll also be released (and I believe they should also have more payment options).
waves! will we be able to get a male mc choice ever?
"Whose route would you choose first? And why?"
I am a rebel by heart, so naturally my first instinct was to refuse the guy who tried to stronghand his way into an engagement.
(Although I DO admire him for his trick, I much prefer manipulation over force.)
That said, the Butler intrigued me right from the start.
And he kept getting better at every turn. (and bad end) ^_^
-"What's your favorite scene/event? "
Hrm... Nothing actually stands out in the Demo.
Other than the Bad Ends of course. lol
-Are you interested in playing the full release? (The full game will be PAID)
I'd happily pay for this game if it was on Steam.
Doubly so if it was a really long game.
I'd probably buy any DCL content too.
Unless, of course, it turns out that the love interests have some sort of hidden do-gooder motive shit. I am SO sick and tired of thinking a character is amazing and evil only to find out he's doing it to help orphans or save someone or have a robin hood complex or some other anti-hero shait. >_>
-"Are the LIs villainous enough for you?"
So far they seem to be. Provided I don't discover the above-mentioned later on in the game.
If he takes over the kingdom, he should be a tyrant, not a benevolent ruler.
If he's a killer, he should kill for profit, not for some justice/just cause.
(If he is just loyal to his master and just plain enjoys killing, that's fine too.)
In short: A villain should never be able to truly justify their actions.
(They may try to, but everyone sees a villain for a villain.
Ask anyone, and they'll still say the Joker is a villain, regardless what the Joker justify his actions with.
Same goes for every true villain out there.)
I don't know what the goals of that organization is, or why they do it, but I will be VERY happy if it's a plot to gain power because they are power-hungry, or get rich or any other selfish and self-centered goals.
(Or if the love interest leaders are exploiting everyone else in the organization, like the Joker does in the Clown War when he pretends he has some just cause but in reality he just want to burn Gotham down to lure batman back cuz he misses his beloved... Now THAT is a complicated love interest, and a posterboy for unhealthy relationships. ...not necessarily in a bad way, as long as it stays in a game. Which is something I don't say often. lol
But I got off topic. My apologies....)
It's fine if they love the main character and want to treat her nice (although I am fine with them being a bit cruel as well, but people have different tastes there), but they shouldn't care about homeless people or starving puppies and whatnot.
So as long as they are what they appear to be in the Demo, then they are villainous enough. ^_^
(If you ever plan to make a yandere game, please tell me.
You may actually manage to create a realistic love interest in it that is capable of both being nice and cruel based on if the mc accept or reject them. lol )
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As a side-note tho, I will say this:
I don't actually mind that Brillheart try and strongarm you into the stuff he does.
I enjoy being able to rebel against it at every turn.
It may be a little irritating, but there is a dark sense of pleasure in being able to lash out at him and reject him when he tries.
(I may even try his route at a later point. My admiration for him rises at every cunning and manipulative trick he pulls. I'm just stubborn when it comes to people trying to force me. lol)
The fact that you CAN lash out and reject him --or try-- that is a VERY good thing. It makes the game feel a whole lot better to play.
Even if it had come with a bad end, being able to rebel against things, even impossible to change things, feels very good.
So you are clearly doing something right.
So kudos! ^_^