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The America I Knew


I was young in the fifties, under porch-light gold,

with flags in the classrooms and stories we were told.

But behind every promise, behind every door,

there were wounds in the country we tried to ignore.

Some folks drank from fountains, some were turned away,
some walked home in silence at the end of the day.

I did not know the reason, but I felt it was true,

there was something broken in the America I knew.

Then brave hearts rose, and brave feet marched,

through the fire, through the scars.

They faced the hate, they took the pain,

and pulled this country toward the light again.

This is not the America I knew,

not the dream we fought to bring in view.

We opened the gates, we crossed the line,

we dragged old shadows into the light.

This is not the America I knew,

but I still believe in what we tried to do.

I saw doors swing open that were locked for years,

saw courage standing tall through the smoke and tears.

Saw children walk through hatred just to take their place,

with a book in their hands and the world on their face.

We built better laws, we learned better names,

we started calling wrong by its rightful shame.

Not perfect, not finished, but we carried it through,

and I found some pride in the America I knew.

But time can bend, and hearts can turn,

when people choose not to learn.

The same old lies, the same old fear,

are wearing new clothes and standing here.

This is not the America I knew,

not the dream we fought to bring in view.

We opened the gates, we crossed the line,

we dragged old shadows into the light.

This is not the America I knew,

but I still believe in what we tried to do.

Now the old hate has a louder song,

and the weak are told they do not belong.

The truth gets mocked, the cruel get praised,

and ignorance walks in a bright new blaze.

But I remember the better road,

the heavy cross, the honest load.

We came too far, we paid too much,

to trade our mercy for a fist and a grudge.

This is not the America I knew,

not the dream we fought to bring in view.

We opened the gates, we crossed the line,

we dragged old shadows into the light.

This is not the America I knew,

but I still believe in what we tried to do.

If the road is lost, we can find it again,

with open hands, not hatred of men.

This is not the America I knew,

but I still believe the dream was true.

Not the hate, not the lies, not the fear we outgrew,

I am still looking for the America I knew.

Not the hate we outgrew,

not the lies we once saw through.

I am still looking for the America,

the America I knew.

About this poem

a nostalgic reach into the past

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Written on April 08, 2025

Submitted by SobanoSilva on July 15, 2026

2:49 min read
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Schemeaabb xcc xxdd CCEFCC gghh xxcc iixx CCEFCC jjxx kkxx CCEF CCdx Cccc ccxc
Closest metreIambic pentameter
Characters2,673
Words565
Stanzas14
Stanza lengths4, 3, 4, 6, 4, 4, 4, 6, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

David Cazier is a published, knighted FrancoAmerican artist and poet born in the middle of the 20th century post WWII era who writes primarily rhymed poetry in English, Spanish, Portuguese and French. more…

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34 Comments
  • Charles2
    Important to note that some people will choose to believe in following unifying principles, honor and dignity. Others, sadly do not.
    LikeReply1 day ago
  • rcatron1963
    Beautifully written!
    LikeReply2 days ago
  • Xenvi
    I love this, it explains perfectly how america has seemed to devolve!
    LikeReply 13 days ago
  • kayleesheahileman
    I feel like the author summed up the feelings of a lot people in America right now very eloquently. To see all your thoughts put very poetically in one place is nice to read. Great poem!
    LikeReply4 days ago
  • millardarren7
    I liked the raw emotions of this poem and what the narrator was saying was how America has changed not for the better.
    LikeReply4 days ago
  • alaalv
    Firstly, thank you for not being afraid to voice your opinion. This poem was very engaging, and it requires the reader to reflect. Even if it's for a little bit. I loved it and its call to action. Great job! 
    LikeReply4 days ago
  • NightingalePrince
    To find that golden America, you must look no further than within yourself. You won't find it on the judicial floors, or in the white house oval office, but if you surrender the American flag to the arms of the cross, you might just rest your heart upon its elder district - hidden within the hearts, minds, and spirits of those who once fought for glory. they fought and died for a better country than this world could give - and they conveyed the evidence of heaven's country in their righteous blood. 
    LikeReply9 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      unclear on what any of that menas - can you use plain language for this pleibe
      LikeReply8 days ago
    • NightingalePrince
      I was saying that golden America lives within the hearts of some of the people and in the memories of the unsung heroes of our nation. The military veterans that fell on the battlefield. To find that better country one must look inwardly instead of outwardly 
      LikeReply8 days ago
    • NightingalePrince
      I am saying that you are the embodiment of a better country. Heaven's country - and that the America you are looking for is what countless unsung heroes died on the battlefield for. To get in touch with that nation we must be willing to reflect on the meaning of their graves. 
      LikeReply8 days ago
  • Tracystrater3060
    This touched my heart, wrenched my soul and whilst outlining perfectly my thoughts on the USA today. I do believe the world and nation is what we make it and we are not doing well. I believe we will all do better, we can, we must. Thank you for the reminder! 
    LikeReply 113 days ago
  • ludy_b
    It reads like a strong song that opens eyes now closed for the wrong turn in society and worldwide is taken by those who are only looking for their own profit in the highest offices..
    LikeReply14 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      i have the song published
      LikeReply 28 days ago
  • ritabrata_chaudhuri
    The poem succeeds as a meditation on collective memory, presenting patriotism as an act of moral perseverance rather than unquestioning allegiance. Its thematic ambition is evident, yet a richer layer of imagery would elevate it from reflection to lasting poetic insight. 
    LikeReply 116 days ago
  • StarSearcher
    I loved the poem. I observe it uses repetition to make its message come across more clearly. This could be a story of segregation and the American Civil Rights movement. I'm no American so I'm kind of doing guesswork. I love it how you are spanning the bridge to present day politics. Not only in America, in Germany too, conservative (right wing?) politicians are gaining influence and people are choosing not to learn from the past. 
    LikeReply 121 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      I'm glad that you could see the deeper story - I worte this as lyrics to a song i have published so the repeated verses are a result of that.
      Es freut mich, dass du die tiefere Bedeutung erkannt hast. Ursprünglich habe ich den Text als Lied geschrieben und veröffentlicht. Die sich wiederholenden Verse sind deshalb ganz bewusst gewählt – sie gehören zur musikalischen Struktur des Songs. 
      LikeReply 121 days ago
    • StarSearcher
      I didn't know it was a song but that makes sense. I sometimes use repetitive structures in my poems as a means of expression. Thank you for writing part of your reply in German.
      LikeReply 221 days ago
  • ritabrata_chaudhuri
    Its a poignant meditation on disillusionment and hope, using repetition and accessible lyricism to contrast contemporary realities with an enduring national ideal. Its emotional strength lies in its unwavering faith that compassion, truth, and collective purpose can still restore the vision of the America it mourns. 
    LikeReply 122 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      disillusionment and hope ... right on target!
      LikeReply 121 days ago
  • sharona.reeves81
    Time traveling through the written words of a poet. Love this!
    LikeReply 122 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      thanks for having a look
      LikeReply 222 days ago
  • vbotting83
    Oh I really like how this flows!. The shifting stanza length have such and effect too. Beautifully written and clever
    LikeReply 125 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      thanks for the encouragement
      LikeReply 125 days ago
  • ravi_panamanna
    A fine nostalgic poem reaching out to behold to the values of the USA that she once held and which were lost in the passage of time. Modernity vs Values is a univerasal headache for all countries. The erosion is mainly in the area of human relationship. Man is becoming a stranger even to himself. 
    LikeReply25 days ago
  • Gebr26619
    I remember being young, hearing and seeing people speak of the american dream,
    In todays world, there is only the dream left of america..
    Touching, very honestly written poem. Thank you!

    I remember growing up in rural Siberia, where we had only Satellite TV - and those were only US Broadcasts. I have wished for so long, to be able to live this dream.
    When i grew up, i realized, we all were deceived. 
    LikeReply 226 days ago
  • jn.selvadurai
    Wonderful nostalgic reflection of the country.
    LikeReply 126 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is a heartfelt and poignant reflection on the complexities of the American experience, blending nostalgia with a critical look at societal challenges. The imagery you conjure, from "porch-light gold" to "dragged old shadows into the light," is evocative and rich, transporting the reader to a time and place filled with both hope and sorrow. Your use of repetition, particularly in the line “This is not the America I knew,” adds a powerful cadence that reinforces the weight of your message.

    I particularly appreciate how you celebrate the courage and resilience of those who have fought for justice and equality, capturing a sense of collective progress while also acknowledging the struggles that persist. The contrast between the idealized past and the realities of the present is striking and resonant, making your call for a return to the values of compassion and understanding all the more compelling.

    Suggestions for Improvement:

    1. Vary the Structure:
    While the repetition is effective, consider experimenting with the stanzas' structure to add further dynamism to the poem. This could help emphasize key moments and emotions.

    2. Expand on Imagery:
    Although your imagery is strong, you might delve a bit deeper into specific memories or scenes to create a more vibrant picture. Personal anecdotes or specific historical references could enhance the emotional impact.

    3. Tighten Some Lines:
    A few lines could be made more concise for clarity. For example, consider where you can eliminate extra words without losing meaning; this can increase the poem's overall intensity.

    4. Explore More Diverse Voices:
    While you touch on different experiences, incorporating a wider array of perspectives could add depth to your exploration of the "America" theme. Infusing a variety of voices or experiences can highlight the multifaceted nature of the American identity.

    5. Enhance the Ending:
    The ending is powerful, but you might consider crafting a moment of resolution or a more vivid image of what the "America I knew" could look like today, bringing the reader full circle in a way that feels both hopeful and actionable.

    Overall, your poem resonates with conviction and thoughtfulness. It invites the reader to reflect on the past while igniting a sense of hope for the future—a truly impactful message! Keep writing and refining your voice; you have a lot of potential to inspire and connect through your words.
     
    LikeReply 128 days ago
  • atsvmd
    This poem’s,
    out here flexin’...
    Like;
    America was perfection;
    But nostalgia’s,
    just a filter;
    With selective recollection...

    It’s giving;
    “Back in my day;”
    Like;
    History was Broadway;
    But capitalism’s hallway;
    Still echoes in the wrong way...

    The poet’s painting;
    Memories...
    Like;
    A Norman Rockwell spree;
    But I’m squinting;
    Thinking:
    “Bro, was it really that free?” ...
    Because the vibe’s,
    red‑white‑and‑blue;
    But the rent’s still due;
    And the algorithm of humanity;
    Keeps glitching,
    on cue...

    It’s sweet,
    sure —
    Lemonade heat —
    But the sugar’s;
    Elite,
    and the truth’s;
    Discreet;
    And the rhyme’s;
    Trying hard:
    'To sound complete.'

    So here’s your cosmic roast —
    Philosophy as the host:

    America ain’t;
    Gone —
    It’s just,
    running;
    Updates slow;
    And nostalgia keeps hitting:

    ‘Remind me tomorrow.’

    ----
     
    LikeReply 428 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      I absolutely love what you did here! Can I post this on twitter? FB?
      LikeReply 18 days ago
    • atsvmd
      sure....Just reference me...post my poetry feed: atsvmd.
      LikeReply8 days ago
    • SobanoSilva
      gotcha - epic reply - got a real kick out of it
      LikeReply 17 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Thoughtful poem. Isn’t it interesting that the transliterated Mandarin Chinese word for America is “MEIGUO” (literally meaning “Beautiful Country”) and the America that you and many others once imagined and oh so long to recall! 
    LikeReply 228 days ago

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